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Old 03-16-2009   #1
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Just some bridal shots for my portfolio

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Old 03-16-2009   #2
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Oh my word, having such architecture to work with and such a beautiful bride! I don't care for the straight on shot of the first one, and the two arches meld into her head. Turning her in this image would have helped quite a bit. Second one, much better, but turn that body! Third one, I really like, but you might have had that flash off to camera right instead of its current position. The shadows are a tad distracting. Head tilt is a little severe in the BW, but I like that the light is short lighting her. Better lighting on the bride on the last one, but slow that shutter speed down and let more ambient light in.

You are off to a good start with these. A little tweaking and they will be stellar!
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Old 03-16-2009   #3
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I think Kelly said what I would have. I have some the same issues myself that I'm trying to work through. Beautiful bride and what a location!
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Old 03-16-2009   #4
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thanks guys
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Second and Fourth....off the charts!!!!! Great job!


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