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Old 03-15-2009   #1
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After i did the first i said i wouldnt do another but guess what? Here are a few so let me know wat you think. Other than resizing nothing has been done.

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I like the use of the reflection in the 1st and I get a huge kick out of their standing under the last supper pic eating cake!
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You did a fine job on those photos! Cheers, Bill P.
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You have some nice expressions, but the lighting all comes off as being a little too flat. Get that flash off of the camera!

the window shot could have really been better if you would have turned the bride's back to the window and let the light from the window illuminate her face by having her turn her face back into the light. Let that window light light her face on that, and don't be so quick to use the flash. Notice how all dimension from her face has been washed out by the flash.

I do like the use of the reflection on the piano. And they do look very happy.
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Thank you for the tips KellyL. I appreciate pointers such as these, they let me know how to improve for the next time.


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