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Old 07-01-2018   #1
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Taken during a Myanmar Water Festival.

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Old 07-02-2018   #2
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It is apparent that the young woman in the center of the image is the subject, but the composition could be improved if you crop about 1/6 of the image from the bottom and enough from the right to remove the other human figures over there. You might possibly remove a bit from the left as well, but keep the child in the background.
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It is apparent that the young woman in the center of the image is the subject, but the composition could be improved if you crop about 1/6 of the image from the bottom and enough from the right to remove the other human figures over there. You might possibly remove a bit from the left as well, but keep the child in the background.
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