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Old 03-26-2019   #1
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This is beautiful, love the lighting, colour hues/tones.
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Very good. I like the way you made use of the shadows, adding depth.
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Very nice.
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I like your composition. The use of a cuke has added atmosphere as was mentioned.



I think you could raise the level of this shot in the following ways. The hot spots on the wall are distracting to me as well as the sharp pockets of shadow and light on the oranges. Using a fill on the main subjects would improve things as well as moving the cuke closer to the main light ( sofening the graduation of dark to light).
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