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Old 07-14-2010   #1
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I decided to sell my iPhone to found some gear that I need to purchase.

I used a gobo for the first time to block the reflection on the screen. I used a Softlighter II overhead and slightly facing the from of subject on boom. One shoot through umbrella on CL. The gobo used was 2 sheets of black foam taped on the white wall (white backdrop) behind subject.

Please let me know what you think. I wasn't happy with the reflection on the screen.

Thank you.

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Frank Vega

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Old 07-14-2010   #2
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That was fund new gear not found.
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I prefer the 2nd photo because it creates better separation between the black screen and black border around the screen.
In photo #1 a white reflector camera right would have illuminated the side of the box. Overall good series
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Old 07-15-2010   #4
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Can't say I like how the silver looks white in some areas.
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Frank,

I agree with what Bob had to say. An image with the phone powered up and some apps showing might also make a good image.

Well done and thanks for sharing.

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