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Old 04-10-2009   #1
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I was taking pictures of my daughter in the park this last week. I noticed a young lady and her mother and they looked as if they were there to take pictures. Her photographer was late. I explained that I was new and needed practice, would they mind if I took a few shots. They said sure and she was great! C&C please.











these are sooc except to make jpegs.

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Nice series.
Maybe a larger aperture would have thrown the bg's a little more out of focus, but I think you did well here.
First one's my fav of the group, but I'd clone out the edge of the garbage can on the right(details)
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Nice job! I like that building in the background too. Like Fran said, a more shallow DOF would be nice; but still I like these.
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thanks. i think my ap was set about 2 or so. it was a bright day and had to set my shutter up at like 4000. still learning all of this.
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Your exposures are really spot on. Nice job on the exposures.
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a great series. This model is a natural.


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