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Old 03-02-2009   #1
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Sunday sisters, known them for a long time, funny how you can see there own personas.
added mom. and a few more

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"Mojo don't be Nice"

Well that's hard in this case because I genuinely and legitimately like this one. If you want me to be critical, it might be just a little better if it was moved over to the left in the frame.

Thanks for the shout out. Am I that notorious here?
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it is off a little. so your saying you didnt like any of the others? I knew IT..lol
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I like it a lot and fun expressions. Really nice.
I could be wrong, but I'd prefer there to be a little more space above their heads.
Tried to add some by Canvas size in PS and I think it looks better to me.
Interested to see what you think.

Editorry posted at same time as you and Mojo.
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it is off a little. so your saying you didnt like any of the others? I knew IT..lol
Hey look I've taken notice of you Ron. And I like your work pretty well, but your defining moment here was in the hot sister thread about the slam dunk. I laughed until my stomach hurt over that comment.
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did a little fix.
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Great job getting some fantastic expressions!
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Hey look I've taken notice of you Ron. And I like your work pretty well, but your defining moment here was in the hot sister thread about the slam dunk. I laughed until my stomach hurt over that comment.
my wife says i never know when to keep my mouth shut, that was one funny post, it got a lot of hits.
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Overall, I like it.
Nits: as MoJo said, move them left in the frame some; have the girls stand up straighter; raise the brunette's arms a bit. Like I said, nits. Very pretty girls, too.
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Overall, I like it.
Nits: as MoJo said, move them left in the frame some; have the girls stand up straighter; raise the brunette's arms a bit. Like I said, nits. Very pretty girls, too.
you thinking a little more towards center or left 3rd of frame?


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