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Old 12-29-2008   #1
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Here's a shot of my niece Abby that I took over Christmas break... Please critique away!

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Beautiful. Great color.
I would have moved her just a tiny bit off center but that's just me. Nice image.
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Beautiful! I LOVE those baby blues. She really pops in this, Kara.
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Really nice and perfect use of light.
Agree with a crop of either side, just don't know which.

Great job!
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Nice composition/lighting.
The main thing I notice from the posted pic is focus - it's sharp on the right shoulder but not quite on the eyes?
She's a wonderful little looker and you've captured a cool expression. Like it!
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Nice job, Kara. Focus/DOF is great. Eyes are beautiful. I'd crop a little off the right side.
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Kara, I think this rocks! This is my suggestion for a crop, not off the right but off the left. I didn't make any adjustments to the image itself, but added a strip of background at the top and a vignette. Your work has really progressed in the few months you've been posting here, I would say this is one of your best, if not the best.
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Wow, Kara, this is beautiful!

You really have nailed it this time, girlie...

I can take it cropped or not - I'm of the mind that centering isn't always an evil creature. And I like loeee's crop too. But I might try it cropping the other direction to keep the oof little jean-clad behind in the picture, it's a nice lead-in to the face, imo.

Go girl!
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Sis! You forgot to say, "black and white"!
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Sis! You forgot to say, "black and white"!
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I think this would ROCK as a b/w conversion!

(whew...thanks, Lo! Almost blew it, there...)


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