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Old 06-08-2019   #1
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In editing these shots, my goal was to emphasize her freckles.







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Old 06-11-2019   #2
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oooo la la

What a beautiful model well photographed and presented here.
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Old 06-11-2019   #3
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A wise man said, "A woman without freckles is like a night without stars." Here they are the final touch for a model who is lovely in both studio and informal settings.
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I think the freckles stand out very nicely.

Since you have constructive critique allowed, I would suggest different crops to emphasize her face more; her upper chest in the first one and the hat in the 2nd one take up a lot of room and are pretty bright. Also on the 2nd, I'd brighten her face a bit.

The first one - I love what you did with her eyes, wow.


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