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Old 10-30-2018   #1
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A friend of mine. Y'all should be seeing more of her next month. Zero retouch.




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She's upset about something.
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The second one is emotional for sure. The first one is pretty close, and dark.
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Getting light in the eyes makes or breaks a portrait. Try to move her so the light gets in there.


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