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Justsomeguy86 06-12-2018 06:34 PM

Working with a model
 
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first time working a model here are some of the best shots.

shadowman 06-12-2018 08:48 PM

Re: Working with a model
 
You've created quite a challenge for yourself shooting in backlit, dappled lighting conditions, images/session would benefit from some fill flash.

Justsomeguy86 06-12-2018 09:06 PM

Re: Working with a model
 
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Originally Posted by shadowman (Post 2392135)
You've created quite a challenge for yourself shooting in backlit, dappled lighting conditions, images/session would benefit from some fill flash.

Well the model is very pleased and thatís all that matters to me and her. She has showed her agent and he is very please as well

FrankZ 09-03-2018 09:13 AM

Re: Working with a model
 
You've asked for constructive critiques and Shadowman gave you a good one. I would not blow him off like that. If you want to get better, you need to be able to grow a thicker skin and be willing to learn.

To be honest, in addition to the lighting issues, her expressions leave a lot to be desired as well. The first two are decent, but it looks like she has checked out after that. The second one could be good but it's ruined by the random patches of light on her face.

nu2scene 09-03-2018 07:52 PM

Re: Working with a model
 
I agree with FrankZ. In the first few images, there is some connection. But in the others she is not there. What type of modeling is this for again?

Justsomeguy86 09-03-2018 07:55 PM

Re: Working with a model
 
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Originally Posted by nu2scene (Post 2397189)
I agree with FrankZ. In the first few images, there is some connection. But in the others she is not there. What type of modeling is this for again?

She just wanted some nice head shots taken


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