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Old 06-07-2018   #1
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I took these portraits a month ago.

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Old 06-11-2018   #2
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Old 09-03-2018   #3
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She's a cutie! I like the expression you caught in the first one. Children don't always have to smile. My favorite child portraits are contemplative, like this.

I like the second one, too with the interesting but not distracting background. The sidewalk bothers me a lot though. My eye just gets dragged down there. Lowering the camera angle a bit should have taken care of that in camera.

Nice work though.


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