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Old 05-17-2018   #11
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Thank You heaterguy.
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Old 05-17-2018   #12
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Her eyes, the slight open lips, the soft lighting, and yes the very soft painterly look.


The eyes, ...There is a connection there. It may be just between her and the camera or perhaps who is behind the camera but her eyes are everything in this shot! What is she thinking or feeling that will leave the rest of us wondering?



A very beautiful lady and equally beautiful shot! I love it with or without the light in the left.


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Old 06-06-2018   #13
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Her gray teeth needs whitening.


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Old 09-03-2018   #14
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I love the painterly look in this. You've done a really nice job with it. If I would do anything at all to it, it would be to maybe burn down that top left a little because it is the brightest part of the image and the eye gets pulled there. But not too much because that's the direction the light is coming from and casting those beautiful highlights in her hair.
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Old 09-05-2018   #15
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I love this portrait. My only critique is that the second flare in the upper left is slightly distracting and takes away from the impact of the portrait.
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Old 09-06-2018   #16
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The flair is a little too bright because it keeps drawing my eye away from her and towards it.


Benji is right about the teeth.
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Old 09-13-2018   #17
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Nice picture. I agree about the left side flare.


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