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Old 03-27-2018   #1
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So covered with drywall mud she cleans up after the other two were getting pics, wants a few herself. I just got lucky as it is hard to get them to model...anyway, moved the lights so the soft box was straight down with a silver reflector on a table in front of her and just the hair light. I like the first but her lip looks too hot...I mean bright...Thank you for all the C&C!








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Old 04-08-2018   #2
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I like the first one best, the smile is most natural, and I'm not bothered by the shine on her lip, though I'd rather see her with less of a full-on view and more of an angled view, since this pose makes her look kind of boxy.
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Old 04-08-2018   #3
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Do you like this better ? It was taken on Easter Sunday.

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Much better, as she seems more at ease and less stiff. Nice job!
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Old 04-08-2018   #5
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Overall I think you're doing a good job.

For nit picking, I don't like when the frames of eye glasses cut into the eyes or eye lids.


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