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Old 03-26-2012   #1
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Hi folks!

I'd apprecite any comments on how I can improve this one please. The original RAW file was converted to mono in Lightroom 4.....

Cheers, Mackem


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Old 03-26-2012   #2
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Very striking image, Wonderful detail around the face, Hard to tell if he is a younger bloke thats had a hard few years or a old bloke in good nick.

Also like the B&W treatment.
Very nice image.
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Cool shot! Very good detail in his face and I really like the kicker lights. They add a nice separation and feel to the shot.

Well done.
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Maybe just a tad lighter in the real dark shadowws, but looks great.
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Nice shot. Looks a bit dark on my monitor IMHO.


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