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Old 11-04-2018   #1
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Nice work, but you have done better in my opinion. I think this one the v under his eye is too prominent. The red might be too much on the headband. But, 100 times better than I could have done.
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Old 11-05-2018   #3
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Nice work, but you have done better in my opinion. I think this one the v under his eye is too prominent. The red might be too much on the headband. But, 100 times better than I could have done.
Many thanks...

I thought the same about the V but that is as it was on the original so just worked with that...

Have adjusted and also the colour..

Hope this looks better

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Nice work Ray.
I prefer the second version,


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