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Old 05-20-2016   #1
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We long to be worshipped
We long to make noise
Take hold of something
Susan play with your toys
Ryan once was a bastard
Now he fathers himself
Bleed out religion
Ramshackle wealth
They print out their money
I bleed on the page
Tell me of Freedom
Tell me of Rage

Now I stand before you
Naked and poised
Better than Jackson
Better than Freud
Beat out the demons
Who trample and molest
This isn't initiation
This isn't a test

The wars are still raging
I'll kill them in time
I wasn't the thorn
But my fathers the vine

I need her to feel
The beat of my heart
Our love is magnetic
Our love is art

One last reminder
She is forever mine
The wars are still raging
Yes I'll kill them in time

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Old 05-20-2016   #2
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Hey, are you in a punk band? These would make great lyrics for a song.
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Old 05-20-2016   #3
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I'm a drummer/author/rapper who finds his greatest feats in the realm of poetry
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You may publish your works on ebook stores for online sales book, then you can show your real talent.


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