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Old 02-14-2016   #1
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I like it. I however am not a portrait guy. With that said, I would have loved to have seen the empty space in front of her than behind her. And maybe, not so much of the head chopped off.
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This is a pretty good exposure technically, and that results in a nice sharp image. However, the pose doesn’t let us see much of your daughter’s face. I also think the light is rather harsh.
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This is a pretty good exposure technically, and that results in a nice sharp image. However, the pose doesn’t let us see much of your daughter’s face. I also think the light is rather harsh.
^^^ What he said ^^^


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