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Old 12-28-2015   #1
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C&C Welcome.
I recognize the hair light is a little hot.

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Old 12-29-2015   #2
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I love the picture but I do not have a big issue with the hair light but do not like her fingers cut off and the other arm blocked like it is. Still it is a lovely photo of a pretty little girl.
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Nice expression of a very pretty girl. My one nit are the catchlights in her eyes. I would have preferred one.
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Overall, a very pleasing photo and good keeper. I think the hand cropped was the biggest, then the hair light issue you noted. The catch lights I didn't notice until I read. Those are minor and easily tweaked, or at least the first 2 are. You got the bulk of everything else done well.
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A nice portrait of an adorable child.
I agree with the comments regarding the cropped fingers.
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Good portrait of an adorable child. I agree with the comments on the fingers and the hair light but the hair light isn't a huge issue for me.


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