17 year old swimsuit model Miranda Lei
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View Poll Results: which shot is the keeper?
One, jungle, with steam 4 40.00%
Two, jungle without steam 3 30.00%
Three, bamboo staff in her hand 1 10.00%
Four, close up 1 10.00%
Five, motorbike pose 1 10.00%
Are you serious, they are all junk, tell her to shoot with me!!! 0 0%
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Old 08-31-2009   #1
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Default 17 year old swimsuit model Miranda Lei

Had a quick shot with young lady, we didn't have much time, the MUA took a while, the model was late, i had to be somewhere.... you know the story. I need you to pick the best of what I have here or suggest improvements for next time.

i. Worked on curves and added a bit of steam to the jungle



2. Original Edit, seemed a bit flat



3. Another one from the day with ocean in the background. i have warmed her up with a warming filter in post, I can reduce this if she is too warm. love non destructive editing!



4. Close up of the work of Olivia Chee, MUA



5. Another scene altogether!



Your thoughts always appreciated, especially constructive criticism !

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Old 08-31-2009   #2
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Default Re: 17 year old swimsuit model Miranda Lei

If she's really modeling the swimsuit, none of them really work. The suit should be more of the focus here but it disappears in the shots.

That said, I like #1 the best. Might be a little too warm on the colors but better than the "flat" version.
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Thanks Brian,

I used the liberty of the title to warn viewers that there were pics of a 17 year old in swimsuit so as not to upset anyone who may have a problem with that. She is on MM 1247197
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Where's the choice for they are all good?
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Old 09-02-2009   #5
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Guess I am overwhelmed by the quality on this site, so that didn't even enter my head! Thanks Steve.
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Old 09-05-2009   #6
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She sure is beautiful but i think the real problem in these shoot are her expression.

From these shoot i like better the last despite i think could improve with some adjustment.
Right arm more on the right so there are less angle and avoid cut on some fingers;
left forearm more up to avoid seeing her elbow;
better expression;
matching shorts with a so nice top I do not think much well
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I prefer the natural skin tones of #2.


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