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Old 07-04-2009   #1
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here are some images of Model Tawny for the 4th

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I think the second pose best highlights her athleticism. Funny -- her waist is so small compared to her bust that she almost looks distorted when shot from straight on, sort of when someone overuses the pinch filter.

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I think the second pose best highlights her athleticism. Funny -- her waist is so small compared to her bust that she almost looks distorted when shot from straight on, sort of when someone overuses the pinch filter.

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I was thinking the exact same thing. The images are well done, and I'm glad to see some shadow under her.
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I think the second pose best highlights her athleticism. Funny -- her waist is so small compared to her bust that she almost looks distorted when shot from straight on, sort of when someone overuses the pinch filter.

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i agree. that's the only thing that bothers me other than that the pose and shot is nice
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Shots are very nice, and she's got Wonderwoman's body, but she needs to soften her face, around the mouth she looks almost clenched. Softening her face a bit might bring out some of her inner beauty. To me she looks like she's struggling to hold her gut in during the pose, or is concentrating on something and should relax a bit. However, the photos are very nice.
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Thanks for all the comments. Some of the corrections needed are in my control. Others like studio size (which leads to a shorter lens focal length) and model selection are based on my budget. Hope to post some new shoots soon.


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