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Old 01-10-2009   #1
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TFCD shoot with another aspiring model for CC.

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Old 01-11-2009   #2
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Beautiful Model and nice images. The biggest distraction or nit I see is the catch light on the side of her in #2. Even though #2 is my favorite.
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Beautiful Model and nice images. The biggest distraction or nit I see is the catch light on the side of her in #2. Even though #2 is my favorite.

Are you referring to the light on her face or in her eyes?

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Are you referring to the light on her face or in her eyes?

Thanks for the complement.
Sorry I meant the light on her head. Seems too bright with a sharp fall off. I am not great with lighting, but it was something that I noticed and it seemed to take away from the image.
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Lovely skin tones. Nice work.
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TFCD shoot with another aspiring model for CC.

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Very well done! Great light, beautiful rich skincolour, great crops!

The tiny nits I have is her left hand position in #1, the-other-way-up and a little more forward, and with a slight bend in her elbow/arm, would have forced her torso slightly forward, giving a bit more 'tension' - IMO.

In #2, not so much the highlighted area on her face as well that on her shoulder is a distraction to me, could both be easily shopped away, though... (a little 'dodge&burn' on face and some cloning on the shoulder...) - again just IMO.

And thanks both for sharing this excellent series!

...just *my* 0.02 worth...

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Sorry I meant the light on her head. Seems too bright with a sharp fall off. I am not great with lighting, but it was something that I noticed and it seemed to take away from the image.
That was the thing I also noticed first. otherwize very nice.

#2: I think it might look nicer if her right shoulder would be a bit more to the cam.
#4:The way the shoulders are in this one looks a bit odd IMHO.


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