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Old 12-28-2008   #1
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Another from last weeks shoot with jessyka lit with one flashgun remotely in what is otherwise a pitch black room.

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Stunning! Love that setup.
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Cool location. I love the dichotomy of her style and the surroundings. I'm big on horizons, so the unlevel bothers me, but that could just be personal preference. To me, if it is not level, make it REAL not level, so it looks deliberate, rather than just a bit off-kilter. Your light is very low, though you cover fairly well by having her head tilt so far toward it.

Overall, I give it a "9," 'cause it has a good beat and I can dance to it.
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Nice shot but I really think you should clean up once in a while when you have a gorgeous girl around!
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This series of shots is so good from the first post to this last one. I personally like this one the very best. I like the setting and the overall look very good choice of model and background. Gives me some new ideas for a shot I have coming up.
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I feel the background and model competes for attention. Feel it would be stronger if background was darker.
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I feel the background and model competes for attention. Feel it would be stronger if background was darker.

I was thinking the tones in the background and the models clothes are too similar. Maybe a slight vignette would force attention more on the model.

The highlights on the model's face and arm seem a bit hot, at least on my monitor.

Great location, posing, model and overall setup.
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The highlights on the model's face and arm seem a bit hot, at least on my monitor.
Maybe calibration is in order, there are no blown highlights in the image .

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I feel the background and model competes for attention. Feel it would be stronger if background was darker.
The one flash that i had available for the wireless set up had to light the model evenly i suppose the background could be sorted in software but i prefered the image with all the complimentary colours

but heres another shot from the same shoot with the area marked by a red square that the model was posing in showing the available light that i had to work in, in the above image. Thanks for comments, Stu
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Maybe calibration is in order, there are no blown highlights in the image .

"A bit hot" is not a technical term just an opinion.
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I was thinking the tones in the background and the models clothes are too similar. Maybe a slight vignette would force attention more on the model.

The highlights on the model's face and arm seem a bit hot, at least on my monitor.

Great location, posing, model and overall setup.
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"A bit hot" is not a technical term just an opinion.
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