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Old 01-09-2009   #11
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Beautiful color.
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Old 01-09-2009   #12
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the white background ones a really nice. I much prefer them ot the red background images. THe last set of reds is really too red for me. The first set is red, but isn't as bad as the really really red last set.
Mr Pickles,please check your Messages from me from last week. I need permission to use your grill pic. I find the RED background in these 2 top pics too intense and therefor distracting ,yet the model is beautiful.The white backgrounds are not nearly as harsh yet also too bright(flashy).I believe a toned down subtle almost invisible background would be more appropriate for her "look". She seems flawless,outfits fine.The composition I like except for the red couch.
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Old 01-09-2009   #13
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I took another look and I think the red background on bottom shot is perfect and bold for that pic and makes it perhaps the strongest statement of the bunch,not merely "pretty".
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First off beautiful work, pics and model... I really like the first one with her expression. I do however think it would compliment her pose if there was also a MUA's, or a stylists hand coming in from the other side for some "final touch ups".. just a thought. The second, in my eyes, looks a bit off.. and I think it's the fact that her right leg looks out of proportion to her from that angle.

The last three are stunning.. thanks for posting these
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Old 01-11-2009   #15
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Delaware Bill,I'm glad i clicked on your link.Nice shots especially the boats.I'm in Newark DE.
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Mr Pickles,please check your Messages from me from last week. I need permission to use your grill pic. I find the RED background in these 2 top pics too intense and therefor distracting ,yet the model is beautiful.The white backgrounds are not nearly as harsh yet also too bright(flashy).I believe a toned down subtle almost invisible background would be more appropriate for her "look". She seems flawless,outfits fine.The composition I like except for the red couch.
I would agree with this completly. Otherwise great photography work.
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