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Old 05-12-2007   #11
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The colors look soft and gentle - perfect for her.
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Nice shots! Pretty girl!
Only thing that I would comment on is in #1 it almost looks like she is in a strain....can't really put my finger on it.
On #4 I would crop just above the knee showing.
Whites of the eyes are a bit over done on some....really sings in #3....the white of her is on the shadow side of her face is way brighter than her other eye.

Just some of my thoughts.....

Cool images!

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Thanks for your comments Dave, on #1 i think it was one of the 1st. shots of her and the rock was jagget and i think it bothered her a little on that shot! But she loosened up later and gave me some nice shots on that rock! On #4 i agree but i cropped it for a 4x6 print and did not want to cut her hand off! I will work on here eyes too! i have a bad habit of trying to get the shots back to the girls to quick to really look at them! Thanks alot for pointing that out to me! Thanks Lloyd.
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WOW - they are excellent !!!!
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Absolutly wonderful, well done.
Love the eye you have for light and composition.
Thank You Very Much Frank, i was really a ball of nerves on this outing,my 1st. outdoor shoot with a very pretty model,she picked the location so i had know idea for what was to become of this venture! But it turned out Ok! she loved her shots and next week we are going to shoot again! All Day, starting in the studio then to a beach then a waterfalls! Thanks again Lloyd.
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Looks like you got it right the to me. Excellent photos.
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All natural light? Wow.

In the first, by the way, her right leg looks relaxed. The tension that I feel in her pose comes from her hand position. Did it give her forearms more deinition? i assume it was intentional.
No it was not intentional I fill that i am very weak when it comes to posing, when i put a model in a pose i let her move at her own pace and shoot if it looks good,i have a lot to learn yet ! Do you have any pointers on posing?? Thanks Lloyd P/S on the dress i dont know what you mean!she picked it out and i thought it went well with her skin tone and would not draw any attention from her face! Would a different color be better??
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Very nice .The exposure on these looks great, wonderful job.

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The colors look soft and gentle - perfect for her.
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I should have explained about the dress. That dress drapes so nicely on her it's almost distracting. Almost? Hell, it is distracting, especially in #1 and #4. It looks fabulous in the light.
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This is my opinion, mind you.

#1 -
Lighting appears kinda flat. Also, the legs are at a 90 degree. Lengthen them out and then shoot where the horizon is crooked, but she isn't. Make sense?

#2 -
Good expression. Again, lighting appears flat, but I don't really find it objectionable. Pretty good image. It needs something (not sure what, just yet) to make the image "pop" more.

#3 -
Very nice. Maybe have her playing with her hair or hand up behind the neck. Give the image some "playful, come hither" type feel.

#4 -
Not too crazy about the posing. Maybe could be better by moving the hand up higher on the column.

Nice images from what you posted. I'm not sure if it's the lighting or just what, but she appears older in #2 than she does in #4. Maybe it's just me. Good job.


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