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Old 08-24-2018   #1
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A few shots of a friend.

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Beautiful lady. Like the second photo the best.
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Not too bad, but for a fashion like shot, the first one doesn't do it. The pose is too something, not sure what a good word is. The 3rd one might be better if she wasn't bent over looking down, but standing straight and looking out 45 degrees from the camera...
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Old 08-26-2018   #4
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I'd say #2 is the best shot. 3 wouldn't be bad if the model was looking down at something (pet, animal, pond, etc). #1, the leg positioning is poor for the shot, just doesn't do it for me.
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Nice efforts, the fourth doesn't fit the series but then again all are a bit experimental, unorthodox, and stylish. Looking forward to seeing more.
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Old 08-30-2018   #6
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Im not getting 'fashion' as the purpose in any of these images. The images are nice, but i wouldn't know that the purpose is to push the clothes.

My favorite of the bunch is #4.

Not sure if its my ipad, but they all seem a bit soft, like you missed your focus point or something.


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