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Old 07-04-2013   #1
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Old 07-06-2013   #2
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Beautiful images. Nicely done. Prefer the first of the three. Have a great day.
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Old 07-06-2013   #3
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Thanks dre4303.
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Old 07-06-2013   #4
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I too like the first image. I feel the 2nd & 3rd images need more DOF!!!
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Old 07-06-2013   #5
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Thank you. I see what you mean. That probably would have been better.
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Old 07-14-2013   #6
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Very nice.
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Old 07-14-2013   #7
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Thanks Mavin!
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Old 07-15-2013   #8
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I think #3 is the strongest. I agree with the DOF comments on all 3. It seems the white balance is a little cool in all of them. #1 I like the pose, but the fan is too distracting. #3 I would crop the bottom to the top of her head because the opening between the bench slats is distracting and the hair looks sloppy.
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Old 07-15-2013   #9
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I think #3 is the strongest. I agree with the DOF comments on all 3. It seems the white balance is a little cool in all of them. #1 I like the pose, but the fan is too distracting. #3 I would crop the bottom to the top of her head because the opening between the bench slats is distracting and the hair looks sloppy.
Thanks for the comments. I will post the different crop later. Maybe tonight, but right now I have to mow the yard. When I edited these I had just gotten a new computer and monitor. I don't currently own a calibrator, so I wondered about the colors. I will warm them up some and see if that is better.

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Old 07-15-2013   #10
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New edit. I tightened the crop and warmed it up. Better?


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