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Old 07-16-2013   #11
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Yes that is much better! I like the crop too. Looking back at the original you posted in comparison, the new edit makes her look alive.
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Old 07-16-2013   #12
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Thank you. I like it better too.
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Old 07-19-2013   #13
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Looks better warmed up, but, daaa-yum, I love that first shot!
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Old 07-19-2013   #14
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I really do not like the eyes in the last one. There is just something weird that I can't describe about the eyes; I find them distracting, and not in a pleasant way.
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Old 07-19-2013   #15
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Looks better warmed up, but, daaa-yum, I love that first shot!
Thanks swampler. I Think that's my favorite too.

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I really do not like the eyes in the last one. There is just something weird that I can't describe about the eyes; I find them distracting, and not in a pleasant way.
JWells, I don't know what to say because I'm not sure what you see that I don't. But, thanks for looking.
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Old 07-19-2013   #16
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We each have our own ideal of what is attractive. I respect that yours differ from mine.
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Old 08-22-2013   #17
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thank a lot for sharing


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