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Old 07-12-2013   #11
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I would echo the cropping comments already made. be thinking "fill the frame with the model"

Backgrounds should be just that, background. If I wanted a picture of a fence, I would get a picture of a fence.

Leaving that much space is only justified as room for copy, and that does not apply here.
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Welcome to the Camel.

Lovely images, especially #1 & #2.
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The first two are my favorites. The Third, I think can be improved by bringing up the exposure a bit on the face. The only thing that bothers me a bit about the sunset shot is the composition. She's too centered in the frame for my taste. But I'm nit-picking. Its a beautiful shot.
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The 2nd picture is well executed.
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Really love the second one well done
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thank a lot for sharing


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