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Old 08-15-2012   #21
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They may not all be perfect but they are beautiful as is the model. #'s 1,2,4,7 and 16 are my favorites.
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Nice images. 1st set silhouette is my favorite but the water and sky are a bit blown out. 2nd set last shot is awesome. 3rd set 3rd shot is my favorite. in the last set 2nd shot her toes are distracting, the big toe looks way-out of place.
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WOW!!! those are beautiful!! #5 in the first set is my fav!!!! Very nice job
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My favorite is the 4th one from the top. What strikes me is the excellent exposure between the model's face and the shoreline/ocean. Beautiful model. Really nice.
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Ok way too many images to comment on all so I will do the first few. First beautiful model. I think overall you did pretty good. #1 I would crop above the crease in her leg. #3 is a great shot I would just get rid of the dead space on the left. Prob one of my favorites from the series. I only really looked at the first set though.
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Thank you for the feedback, much appreciated.

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This weekend's shoot, my friend at the beach.

I'm about half way done with processing, watch my stream for new pics daily.

Flickr: jgunder's Photostream

Here are a few of the ones already posted.












Thanks for looking


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Nice contrast of natural beauty and gritty environment.
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Awesome work!!!
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