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Old 04-05-2012   #11
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Thanks everyone. Aenna is thrilled to see your comments.

Sailor, I agree with you about the portfolio. When I post 40-50 images from a shoot, it's to give the model the greatest number of choices. I learned sometime ago that the model invariably picks different frames than I would so I often post stuff that is technically good but that I don't particularly care for in terms of pose or expression. It amazes me what they then choose. With that said, what I post on here is what I think is my best which is why C&C on here is so valuable.

As for this set, I'm sure her agency will pick ONE at most. I'll be really curious to see which, if any, they like.
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John
Model is beautiful, no doubt.

I know you are calling these Fashion and I know Bobby has shared the definition of fashion as the model merely providing the frame on which the clothes hang, but we both know that you don't mean these as fashion in that sense.
In that light, the hands are killing these. They look great in 3, and look unfeminine in all the rest.
......the devil is in the details my friend. Just keeping it real.

Nice lighting, clarity and focus, and some interesting poses.
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Old 04-05-2012   #13
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Thanks Fran. I'm calling it fashion because (1) that's what Aenna models and (2) I'm taking Bobbys' advice re: not having the model connect with the camera in about 50% of this shoot.

As always, I welcome any comment from you but this time I'm gonna respectfully disagree. Most of these poses are right out of a couple of catalogues that I had on my iPad. I will, however, go back and look through things again cause it's always possible I missed the whole hand thing.

Thanks again.
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That's the thing this is a forum and it's cool to have disagreement.
Look at her left hand in #2.
Look at her hands in #3.
Which is better?
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Nice Job with these John!
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Nice Job with these John!
I agree...very good.
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Stan and Andy, thanks. A couple of these were requested for 9 x 12 prints so something is going in her look book.


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