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Old 09-11-2011   #1
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Had a fantastic shoot with the fabulous Louisa on Monday.. the weather was an utter nightmare with rain and wind but i think we still managed to get some great shots
All shots are a mix of natural light and off camera flash in the form of a sb800 through a softbox (which kept getting blown over)
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Old 09-11-2011   #2
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Love #1. The last two look like you could have used more/larger light.
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Old 09-11-2011   #3
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Very nice set.

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very nice series
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Lovely images. The shadows are a bit too pronounced.
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Old 09-11-2011   #6
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I really like #3 but its pretty dark on her left side of her face were her hair is at. Hit that with some light and it would be awesome IMHO
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Very nice , I like number one best but they're all great...
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really good like them all!
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super set, thanks for sharing...
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Numbers one and three are my picks, but number three is a bit dark. There is also a bulge of skin on Louisa's right side just above her jeans that I would fix in post if I were you.


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