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Old 03-23-2011   #1
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Default First model shoot with my new office studio.

Be kind with the critiques, as this is my first ever shoot. Nadia wants to get into a little modelling and wanted to build her portfolio.












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She is hot hot hot! At a quick glance, the only thing I see you might want to consider cloning is in the first image, her left eye, the lower catch light that is half and half in the white and the iris looks a little odd.

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I didn't like the catch lights in the first either, but a killer smile. I didn't like her feet in the second one. The third her fingers on left hand (on the right) are "missing" (bothers me, but others probably not so much). The 5th one she has stray hairs in her right (top) armpit-ish area.
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After a second glance you might want to consider running a light skin smoothing application on the first one since her face is looking a little textured. I'm one who does not likes the extreme smoothing but I do like them when applied lightly and tastefully.
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Hot model great set. Nicely done!!
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Thank you and thank you for the notes.

I'm glad you guys can see the flaws as when Im taking the photos too much is going on that I miss some small things.

We are doing another shoot when I get back and will try to keep the comments while I shoot.

I did not even notice the tiny catch lights. Its from the white tile floor.

Over all Nadia is very pleased with the photos and she was the perfect model. She does her own make up.

Came to my office from 11am and left 5pm.
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Nice set, great looking model
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she is hot shots are awesome.
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great looking model no doubt...in the first one her lips look like they have a plastic covering over them...they look too wet & glossy


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