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Old 03-25-2011   #11
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great looking model no doubt...in the first one her lips look like they have a plastic covering over them...they look too wet & glossy
I think Nadia applied that wet and glossy lipstick. She is a trooper between change of clothing she would apply new lipstick to match the outfits all by herself.
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Old 03-27-2011   #12
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Your images are a lot better than mine, but I'm learning. Like you I always seem to get too caught up in the moment and let the little "got ya's" slip in. I learned the hard way, for instance, to cut every tag out of everything a model wears after spending an hour Photoshoping one out of a set of images of a friend.

Finding my own errors has made me a bit hypercritical, so please forgive me for pointing out a tiny flaw in #4 - the swimming suit bottom is gaping open. Beyond that, I really like the image.

I think that #3 is my favorite, but I really like #5 too. I would, however, have liked #5 even more if the face had been just a bit lighter.
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Very pretty,a natural as a model. Great eyes and poses.
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Old 03-29-2011   #14
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Nice colors, congrats
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Old 04-04-2011   #15
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I really like #1
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Old 04-06-2011   #16
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Great set love the lighting, just thing the B&W images could do with the contrast bumping up.

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love the outfits


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