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Old 11-02-2010   #1
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I had a spontaneous idea...

and here the result:

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Old 11-02-2010   #2
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I'd like to see a tad more of her left arm but I think it is creative, fun, and season appropriate
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awesome compotition and colours... lens & camera of the shoot? good pic!
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Old 11-03-2010   #6
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Howdy,

Besides the left arm, maybe a different angle and crop woukld be better ? She is pretty close to the middle horizon and could easily be put further down the bottom.

Love the colours
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Looks good , great colors and model posing. How high up were you and what kind of lighting did you use, it looks good , nice and soft
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I agree about the arm. It sort of looks like she's twisted. But other then that, Great Job!

It reminded me of this picture that I took of my daughter a couple years ago.
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I agree about moving here down to a third line but that's a nit.

I love the concept, the colors and, of course, the gorgeous implied nude model.


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