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Old 05-07-2010   #1
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My first shoot with my new 5D Mk11 - amazing camera....

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I only had one light to work with...I would appreciate any input I can get as I am very new to photography.

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Old 05-07-2010   #2
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Excellent series, #2 is the best of the three. One light, you used the hell out of that one light. I would have liked #3 better if the model were looking more toward the camera.
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Old 05-07-2010   #3
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Nice images, love #2, great job!
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Old 05-07-2010   #4
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Thank you very much, I appreciate the comments...
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Old 05-07-2010   #5
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I agree with what everyone else has said...number 2 is the best! I personally find the problem with shots like #3 is that you look up her nose... put the head down just a bit and have her look off over your left shoulder as if peering into the distance (America's next top model suggestion). overall nicely done with only one light...
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I like # 3. I think I should try this simplified method to capturing images. Thanks for posting and giving me a possible project in the future.

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Old 05-08-2010   #7
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I also like #3. The longer you look at the pic the more your captivated with her personality. You donít see this kind of shot often and you have pulled it off excellently.
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Great work..... #2 is the best .... Thanks for sharing ...
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Kudos also to her mua. Her eyes look fabulous.
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I have the same camera , you'll love it .

Great images , I like them all... If I had to chose one it would be # 2 !


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