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Old 03-25-2010   #11
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Most of these are very appealing. The color and lighting looks really great. There are two photos that I am really not a fan of. I think the numbers would be 13 & 14. Red dress bent over...makes her look pregnant (not that pregnant is a bad thing). The one right underneath it (red dress against big door also makes her look pretty chunky. I think it is the dress and how it handles various body positions.
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Old 03-26-2010   #12
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you have some nice shots here, The look of 2 and 15 are by far my favorite! very pure, beautiful expressions! 8 & 20 are close 2nds with the blown hair look, love it!
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Old 03-26-2010   #13
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I like 2 the best, but the pose with the pearls in 11 is a nice touch.
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Old 03-27-2010   #14
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thanks for all the comments
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Old 06-15-2010   #15
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These are great. I really like the processing. And of course the model is absolutely beautiful.

Thanks for sharing.
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Old 06-16-2010   #16
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Love # 2, the upper body shot. The clarity of her face and the backgroung blur make the model stand out. Very nice.
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Old 06-16-2010   #17
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Agree #2 lovely shot
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Old 06-16-2010   #18
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A lot of tilting and vignetting for my taste but noted you've been trying out some PP work.
Some cracking shots here and many flatter the model well, as well as show off some nice PP of yours. Very interesting series.
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Old 06-16-2010   #19
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nice series a few are top also a great model
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Old 06-16-2010   #20
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Very nice series,

The mood , the model's hair style and clothing, the background environment all contribute to give me hints of Mona Lisa kind of feel.

Outstanding... !!


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