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Old 12-16-2009   #1
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my mouth is watering....
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I think I gained 3lbs just looking at this.

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uuh...YUM!
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I would love to have that. good thing we have cake in the house.
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Great Capture, I think that the only thing that bothers me is the crop on the bottom cherry. Great work and keep shooting.
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Old 12-31-2009   #7
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The piece of cake looks beat up. The top cherry looks a little deflated. There are chunks of each layer contaminating other areas. I think the lighting is kind of flat too for this kind of food shot. This is in the "commercial photography" pro section so I'm not holding back on the crit.
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Oh, Wow! That looks so yummy. Great job.
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Old 01-26-2010   #9
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The piece of cake looks beat up. The top cherry looks a little deflated. There are chunks of each layer contaminating other areas. I think the lighting is kind of flat too for this kind of food shot. This is in the "commercial photography" pro section so I'm not holding back on the crit.
And the cherries on the plate don't have the sparkle that the upper one has.
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