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Old 02-03-2010   #11
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i'm hungry now!!!!
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Old 02-05-2010   #12
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Seems that the cherries in the forground are a bit overwelming. Nice photo otherwise.
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Old 02-08-2010   #13
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The piece of cake looks beat up. The top cherry looks a little deflated. There are chunks of each layer contaminating other areas. I think the lighting is kind of flat too for this kind of food shot. This is in the "commercial photography" pro section so I'm not holding back on the crit.
Wow, good eye. I learned a lot from this critique.
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Old 02-08-2010   #14
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Do they still spray Pam or something like that on food to make it shiney for commercial food shots?


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