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dannv 02-02-2016 02:53 PM

A copy cosmetic shots
 
These are a couple shots for an online seminar. Thoughts?

https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1591/...4d725893_z.jpg

https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1671/...6f723772_z.jpg

Brooks 02-02-2016 04:56 PM

Re: A copy cosmetic shots
 
I like the first one a lot although I think the cap should also be in focus and the lipstick rotated CC just a bit to center the Loreal logo. The second one I'm not so sure about the shop rag and wrenches as props and the black background just seems to make the shot look unfinished.

Mark McCall 02-03-2016 12:26 AM

Re: A copy cosmetic shots
 
I agree.
There's a bit of a disconnect between a feminine product and tools.

dannv 02-03-2016 11:51 AM

Re: A copy cosmetic shots
 
Thanks guys. I appreciate the comments.

Brooks, you're right, the lipstick should have been rotate a tiny bit to camera right. Thanks.


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