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Old 03-07-2012   #1
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This is very well done. These large machines with their different surfaces are difficult to light. I think you did a great job!

The only thing I could suggest is to holding a large 4'x8' piece of black foam-core 3' off the ground to the left of the machine would eliminate some of those reflections in that glass panel. Maybe a polarizing filter on the lens could do the same thing?

Still, a very nice job.


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