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Old 05-18-2009   #1
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Old 05-19-2009   #2
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the light on their faces is too strong imo. Like the eyes in the 2nd though.
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And I like strong light, than the eyes are the mirrors of the soal!
I dont like vague pictures and much shadow the so-called art-pictures.
So it is a matter of taste.

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Old 05-19-2009   #4
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Bujin,
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Good conversion to B/W.
There could be some more details in the whites, but is indeed a matter of taste.


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