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Old 12-07-2011   #11
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The second edit is a great improvement.
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The bird on it's own is a work of art. Your first edit kind of plays it up as an artistic piece by adding a 3D look. To me it resembles a porcelain figurine.

The second without the edge glow makes it a beautiful bird again. Because the background is so plain all attention goes to study the bird which I think is good, but not very natural. With some careful selection I think the bird could be isolated and placed over different soft focus background. Something green and jungle like. Just a suggestion.

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Mark I took your suggestion and this is my 3rd edit.
Thanks for your suggestion
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Old 12-07-2011   #13
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SUPER! Yeah! I really LIKE this one. I haven't done a comparison, but the bird seem richer and overall the feel of the composition is great. Much more natural looking background.

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