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Old 07-02-2007   #1 (permalink)
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Some Pics from 2 weeks ago, my second "paid" Wedding, Please Critique

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The exposure on the first one looks great. I am trying to ascertain the placement of your flash unit. In the third one, wow, what a set! I hope you took a series of shots with that exposure because the doorway complements the picture nicely, but it looks like she is ready to stab someone with those flowers!
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The first and third shots are very good. Kudos to you! The red channel slightly blown in the first? You could select by color, then desaturate a tad...or it could be my monitor.

But the 2nd one seems too gimmicky to me...seems to have "process burn".

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I agree with Pavel on the red colors in the first. Pretty deep red. Maybe so in the third too. I also agree that the middle one just doesn't agree with me. Maybe if there was no confetti in her face? But maybe that wouldn't get it done either...

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