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Old 4 Weeks Ago   #1 (permalink)
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I like the expression on his face, but I think you've got too much DOF there, also, a tighter composition that cuts out the menus and Perrier logo would be nice.
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Very nice! Great capture! Cheers, Bill P.
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Great, but I would crop it around the window pane
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Great capture....reminds me of Bresson photos!
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I think the comp is great, the window logos, menus, and extra people make this a nice street scene. Nice job.
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All - thank you for your comments - it is much appreciated.

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Great, but I would crop it around the window pane
I disagree.

It is two interdependent photos and without the right-hand part it wouldn't work. It shows beautifully the man's separation from the world outside. If you crop it to the window frame - still quite nice maybe but then a lot weaker.

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I like the expression on his face, but I think you've got too much DOF there, also, a tighter composition that cuts out the menus and Perrier logo would be nice.
For me, menus and Perrier logo simply add to its atmosphere.

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Merci beaucoup Mr. P!!

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