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Impromptu shoot. Let me know what you think.




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I like whimsical feel of it. Good for an impromptu.
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Thanks Mike!
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Depending on your intentions, you have a rather
successful image there. I can actually FEEL your
boredom :-(



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Thanks Golem! Intentions were trying to incorporate found objects into a photograph. I think my Art Director skills could be improved.
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Thanks Golem! Intentions were trying to incorporate
found objects into a photograph. I think my Art Director
skills could be improved.
Forget the AD bit ... just put it all on something you can
rotate independently of your table top. Then moosch all
junk into one heap, with no intentional spaces between
items. Now light and shoot the pile. You can rotate it to
get various versions of the heap, alter lighting, camera
height, tighten framing, etc, etc. All I'm saying is that a
premeditated arrangement for objects seems to be not
your top skill. Nothing wrong with your photography
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Ahha! That is a brilliant idea that i have never tried. Thanks Golem. I will give it a shot and post the results.
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Nice shots , Craig. I like the arrangement and denser purples of the second shot. The background bright areas would be nicer if a little less bright. Jim
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