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Old 12-25-2010   #1
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Here is another attempt at the skate image.

I used an old slide projector camera left as the main light.

I used black matt board cut in the shape of a window in between the skates and main light.

To add a little interest I put a branch with a lot of twigs in front of the window to emulate the shadow of a tree growing outside the window.

I also used a reflector camera right for a little fill.

Comments and critiques are always welcome.

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Definitely looks like sunlight . However, the dark window shadow on the left looks perfect but the skate shadow looks too light due to the reflector. Anyway of darkening the light shadows? Perhaps a re-shoot without a reflector or control the reflector using foil or mirror so that only the skates receive reflector light. Overall it looks good
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Thanks for commenting Bob. When I get a chance I’ll redo the image without the reflector.
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Sportster, if you can get your hands on some old slide mounts, you can make gobos that will actually fit into the slide projector. You could do your window frame that way. I have an old book on photo lighting (newish copy, but written in the 80s) that recommends using a slide projector as an inexpensive light source and shows a shot with the "window frame" shadow made by cramming two match sticks into a slide mount.

This is a nice shot (I agree with Bob about the shadows being too light though). You make me want to get my hands on an old slide projector.
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Sportster, if you can get your hands on some old slide mounts, you can make gobos that will actually fit into the slide projector. You could do your window frame that way. I have an old book on photo lighting (newish copy, but written in the 80s) that recommends using a slide projector as an inexpensive light source and shows a shot with the "window frame" shadow made by cramming two match sticks into a slide mount.

This is a nice shot (I agree with Bob about the shadows being too light though). You make me want to get my hands on an old slide projector.
Thank you Loeee, I have been thinking about using some of my slides as backgrounds but I hadn’t thought of using the slide mount for a gobo. I have a few hundred mounts in a closet with some not so good images in them. I’ll give your suggestion a try.

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What a neat idea - I think you've pulled off "sunlight" quite well. I'm looking forward to seeing your slide mounted gobos too!
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Thanks for commenting Athena.
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Toby, I like your composition. The innovative idea of a window gobo with tree branches is a real winner.

Thanks for the neat idea of using a slide projector. I have two collecting dust that I can try using. I even have a bunch of slide blanks to experiment with.

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