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Old 06-12-2018   #1
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first time working a model here are some of the best shots.

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Old 06-12-2018   #2
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You've created quite a challenge for yourself shooting in backlit, dappled lighting conditions, images/session would benefit from some fill flash.
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Old 06-12-2018   #3
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You've created quite a challenge for yourself shooting in backlit, dappled lighting conditions, images/session would benefit from some fill flash.
Well the model is very pleased and thatís all that matters to me and her. She has showed her agent and he is very please as well
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Old 09-03-2018   #4
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You've asked for constructive critiques and Shadowman gave you a good one. I would not blow him off like that. If you want to get better, you need to be able to grow a thicker skin and be willing to learn.

To be honest, in addition to the lighting issues, her expressions leave a lot to be desired as well. The first two are decent, but it looks like she has checked out after that. The second one could be good but it's ruined by the random patches of light on her face.
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Old 09-03-2018   #5
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I agree with FrankZ. In the first few images, there is some connection. But in the others she is not there. What type of modeling is this for again?
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Old 09-03-2018   #6
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I agree with FrankZ. In the first few images, there is some connection. But in the others she is not there. What type of modeling is this for again?
She just wanted some nice head shots taken


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