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Old 06-12-2018   #11
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I also darkened the hair a bit.
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Old 06-19-2018   #12
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I like it but it seems to be mixed keys. With a darker background, maybe have her dress in darker clothes.
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Old 07-09-2018   #13
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It's unusual to mix keys with a dark background and light clothing. The contrast throws your perceptions off. The last edit by someone softens the background and makes it more pleasing to me (not sure about those eyes! )
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Old 07-10-2018   #14
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Of course, the eyes can go back to how they were!
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Old 09-03-2018   #15
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The eyes are maybe a bit overdone, but they do have more life in them. Maybe just bring it down a notch.


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