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Old 6 Days Ago   #1
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softer smile........if any opinioDSC_4133-1-2 modified by cgopal shroti, on Flickrn...?

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Looks good from a distance, there are some rough spots around the mouth and on cheek from editing that are a bit distracting though. Composition and overall monochromatic processing is spot on.
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thnks shadowman for ur evaluation...am obliged.
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Interesting composition. The skin lacks detail. "Plasticy." Over-retouched. Needs separation between hair and background. Can't tell where the hair ends on the top of her head.
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Arved....thnks for comments.....In many pro works, we have noticed a little bit of plasticity, like in films and fashion shows....the reason behind facial details....I detest pimple-or-other spots ridden photos in young gen....so do some work for their satisfaction....

Reg. bg.....in many of low key photos, the bg and subject's light is determined on circumstances or made so. There is already a soft white bg elevating the face..at left side. and to that white light of bg, the hanky in front is well balancing the face.....lol.

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